Do you agree or disagree that preventing smoking from public places is good or bad. Supports your answer with reasons and details.

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Do you agree or disagree that preventing smoking from public places is good or bad. Supports your answer with reasons and details.

Health is the most important part in our lives. We cannot do our work or enjoy our time if we were sick. Some people would agree with smoking should not be allowed in public places, other would disagree. In my view I would strongly support avoiding smoking in public places because of few important reasons.

First, smoking will effect on the children health in public places. Children want to enjoy their time by interaction with other people or other children like in parks or at malls. So, when there are a lot of smoking there, it will cause a lot of health problem by effecting on their respiratory system. For example, I could remember when I took my youngest son to the Knee park that located near my home. Luckily, there are a lot of children and many activities that they could do. Unfortunately, there were a group of men smoking near this playground. Consequently, my son was smiling the polluted air with smoke . After few hours, he started caughting and had headache. So, I took him directly to the emergency room. They told me that he had inflammation in his lung because he smells un healthy air. As you can see, smoking in public area could cause a lot of healthy problem to the poor children .

Second, smoking in office building would decrease working productivity. When many people smoke in the working place, they have to leave their places to go out and smoke out side. Sadly, this will cause to decrease their working time and wont finish early. For instance, my friend Tom was working in insurance company. He was a good smoker. At his office, every one should finish his work with limited time. Sadly, his boss gave him working sheet for new patient and he had to finish within 3 hours. Unfortunately, my friend could not do that because he had to go every 20 minute and smoke outside. This plainly shows that smoking will effect on the people that they smoke a lot.

In sum, smoking is a bad habits and it had many negative impact on people. It not only harm the other innocent people, but also it decreases their working efficiency. So, all of us should support preventing smoking from many places.

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