Do you agree or disagree in the statement if people have opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a jab that would be more satisfying.

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Do you agree or disagree in the statement if people have opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a jab that would be more satisfying.

All people definitely want to have the best and decent job for themselves. But, in my opinion it is better to take advantage of every chance for working and making money is necessary. In our competing world, it is really hard to find a job and making money. In addition, by taking any jobs we can get enormous experiences which can be useful for our future.

Now, it is really difficult to gain a work opportunity because of lots of applicants for any position. We can realize that how many young people is unemployment in our community. The youth after graduation from university cannot find any work and he or she sometimes gets disappointed. I remember that when I took part in the exam for being accepted as an agriculture engineer two years ago. Surprisingly, there were large people for just five positions of the work. Most of them had studied for the exam from long time ago. The important point of this memory is that I knew most of them were not educated in the pertinent majors. There were graduated people from majors like science, art, and also from architecture. No wonder, the lack of job in the modern time cause that people become satisfied with every kind of job situations.

Working can give us great privileges that may change our life. In fact, working in a definite career doesn't mean that people should be at that work for ever. People can work contemporary until they find the better one and this chance can turn into a great experience. As an example, when she started to work, my sister was very reluctant, but after a while she warned us that she had a better proposal of work. In fact, while working, one of her coworkers introduced her to a perfect company. If she didn’t accept her previous job in hope of reaching a better one, she would never success in taking the second job. Furthermore, she describes that she could learn numerous information while working of her colleagues and her boss. When she stared to discuss on her experiences, she can realize each of them as a step of her success, although at first confront, they seemed unendurable and hard ones. As a matter of fact, it had better that we try any jobs are proposed to us with knowing that it might be great chance for us.

In my opinion, it better to get any chance for working today. As we know, finding perfect job is the hardest thing for anybody. Moreover, every job has advantages which might be lucrative for the future.

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We can realize that how many young people is unemployment in our community.
We can realize that how many young people are unemployed in our community.

it is better to take advantage of every chance for working and making money is necessary.
it is better to take advantage of every chance for working, and making money is necessary.

she would never success in taking the second job.
she would never succeed in taking the second job.

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