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Do you agree or disagree with the statement: the professional athlete deserves high salary?
It's the common phenomenon that the athlete earned extraordinary high salary compared to the usual. Many famous athletes are even treated no less than the movie star, such as, Lina, who has advertised for several brand on the television after becoming the world champion. Another example, GuoJingjing has got married with a wealthy man and smoothly became one member of rich family which considered a dream of girls. Nowadays, due to the professional athletes' possess of wealth, It's hot debated that do they deserve the high income? From my perspective of view, they definitely deserve it. I've ex...
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