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Do you agree or disagree with the statement that we could pursue the economic development regardless of the environmental pollution.
Some people argue as if it is a general truth that the economic development should be placed prior to the environment problems. But to be frank, I cannot agree with them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.
The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant to the basic fact that the environment has always played an important part in our daily lives. As is known to all, no one lives alone in the world there must be many other things around us, such as the fresh air, the green trees, the lovely birds and colorful flowers. In spite of that, people still focus on immediat...
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No. of Words: 502 350
No. of Characters: 2270 1500
No. of Different Words: 271 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.733 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.522 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.308 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.965 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.408 0.50
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