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Do you agree or disagree with
Teachers’ performance should be evaluated by students rather than by other teachers
Nowadays, there are many universities utilize different ways to examine the performances of teachers. Some colleges believe that they could acquire more accurate results by conducting survey in the teachers’ group because the teachers’ coworkers are more familiar with other teachers. Some universities incline to inquire information from the students because they think the direct offspring of the teachers’ performances could be implied from the students’ feedback and grades. From my perspective, I must uphold the idea that university must evaluate teachers’ efforts from students rathe...
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Sentence: Some colleges believes that they could acquire more accurate results by conducting survey in the teachers' group because the teachers' coworkers are more familiar with other teachers.
Description: The fragment colleges believes that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace believes with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Sentence: Admittedly, we cannot ignore the fact that teachers have many other responsibilities to undertake apart from educate their students.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to from and educate
Sentence: So it is reasonable to test the teachers' show by enquiring some details from their students.
Error: enquiring Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 522 350
No. of Characters: 2747 1500
No. of Different Words: 246 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.78 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.262 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.806 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 202 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 172 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 125 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 76 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.696 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.398 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.652 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.34 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.516 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.212 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5