Films can tell a lot about the country in which they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movie? Use specific reason and example to support your response.
Films can tell a lot about the country in which they were made. From my experience in watching movies which I have seen in my life I learned a lot about other countries such as culture,their traditional foods and history of those country.
When I was watching Korean movie, I learned a lot about their culture such as how they behave in the anniversary of dying any one of their family. They will go to his/her grave and put foods on it. After that they bow in front of the grave. So that means without going to that country I can learn learn a lot from their films.
In addition, when I was seeing Korean movie, I learned about their traditional foods and their local foods. When seeing those movies, I learned some foods which Korean people want to eat like sushi, kimbap and noodles.
Finally, I know some about history of Korea. Most of problem they have was between south Korea and north Korea and they departed from each other. The acsent of their speaking are also very different.
In conclusion, I think if anyone want to know about any country the best thing to do is watching movie from that country.
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Sentence: In conclusion, I think if anyone want to know about any country the best thing to do is watching movie from that country.
Description: The fragment anyone want to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace want with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: The acsent of their speaking are also very different.
Error: acsent Suggestion: accent
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
better to use this pattern:
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para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
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