I PREFER MOVING IN SEARCH FOR A BETTER PLACE
I prefer moving in search of a better place
although many people do not like changes, different people has different opinions about they lives, I prefer moving to a different place, this way I can learn different cultures, and different customs. There’s always a possibility of getting a nice job and moderate climate or ever a safer place to live, for example: my hometown is a big and beautiful city is nice and hot every day, it is surrounding by beautiful beaches, is full of tourists all year around, but the range of crime is very high, so I moved out searching of safer environment as well as better education.
I enjoy changes on my life, I like the challenge, the adventure, I like to learn, to make new friends, to learn new languages, to experience new emotions. The important decision of changing the social environment, area, and familiar background definately affects one’s life.
Not only is this decision hard to make, but also it requires one’s to be exceptionally self-confident, mature and independent. People often have to take such decisions for life.
The decision to move out may have disadvantages but in time it will be overcame by the advantages. It is important to take crucial decisions in life, so we can progress, but only if we do the right action in the right moment. Moving in to a different environment is certainly an enriching experience. Having taking the vital decision had expose me to a new cultures, new philosophies and values, consequently I had advance my general knowledge and improved my social skills.
Move into a different community certainly demonstrate exceptional courage, bravery and determination, from my point of view, moving in a foreign environment for example is important to intellectual development.
In conclusion I would like to travel and live all around the world in different places, meet different people, experiment different couturs, learn different languages because I believe it’s highly beneficial.
Don't try to list all reasons in one essay. Instead just list 2 or 3 reasons and then explain those reasons in details. for example:
reason 1: can have new friends
reason 2: can have better edication
reason 3: can have better life.
Make the essay be well organized.
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