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If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer?
If I had the chance to change one thing in my home town, I definitely tried to modify the sanitation system.
Humans, the most intelligent creatures on the Earth, can be truly named as "The garbage makers". In a 24-hour period people make waste materials which sometimes equate in weight to the body mass of a fully-grown adult. In highly-populated regions such as cities managing such huge amount of waste material is a considerable problem; however usually is not sensed by citizens because of the ever-busy sanitation system. Utilizing the taxes payed regularly by citizens, municipality has th...
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