If you could invent something new what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed. Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed.
Since I began to study economics, I have thought about developing and expanding e-money concept that I believe it will lessen some problems and issues which people and countries face up now. Before mention about its advantages and disadvantages, let us look what is definition of this idea. Definition of e-money is electronic money which refers that all paper bills and coins will be abolished, and all the money will be saved electronically into one card. Contrast to debit and credit card, this card will not have currency unit, the foreign currencies will also be able to be saved in this account...
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