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Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land? Use specific details to explain your answer.
Owing property has been a great idea for me since my childhood days. The concept of owning a property as such, kindles my senses and places me in a fantasy world. Many would say that, if they own a property, they would build a huge house like a palace, or start a business of their own etc.. But my wish is unique and quite different from many others who think alike. If I received some land to use as I wish, I would construct a multi-specialty school in the given land area. I would make the school, the best in the country, if not at-least in that particular city. The kind of in...
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