Independent writing ( question 2 ) Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Traveling around the world is one of my favorite hobbies; it’s really a good experience to know a new people from different cultures and languages. But there is an argument about preferring to travel alone or with companions. Some people enjoy traveling alone, but with respect to me, I will choose traveling with my friends for many different reasons.
First of all, my friends are my happiness I cannot do anything thing without them, because they are the reason of my smile. If I travel alone without them, my trip will be so bored and meaningless. Visiting new place will be more enjoyable and interesting when my friends are with me, since we have many things in common and we understand each other from one sign. For example, me and my friends love to watch football games, we courage same team. So we decided to travel to Spain for watching the football game alive and that was so fun, we screamed till our voices were gone during cheering to our favorite team . we enjoyed our time just because we were together.
Second, traveling with companions can provide for all a good helping and the trip will be safer. Sometime unexpected troubles can happen and when you are alone on the city rather than yours, that will be a serious problem because you don’t know what you have to do. While traveling with your friends can make a big differences and trip will be easier. For instance; I traveled with my friend to Paris but I don’t know French language. I am lucky person because I have a friend who speaks a French language, so he guided us to very awesome places in France easily.
However, some people believe that visiting new cities alone is much better than going with a group. They think that will be more fun and easy with respect to them and they will not restricted with others, because not all members in the group have same hobbies and like the same things. In addition, some people love to discover the city in time different than others.
To sum up, exploring anew different place all around the world with friends will be an amazing adventure that they can add it to their unforgettable events in their life. Nothing is beautiful than sharing the smile with closest persons to me .
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Sentence: First of all, my friends are my happiness I cannot do anything thing without them, because they are the reason of my smile.
Description: A pronoun, nominal is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to anything and thing
Sentence: I am lucky person
Description: The fragment am lucky person is rare
Suggestion: I am a lucky person
flaws:
Most sentences are pretty simple sentences. More compound or complex sentences wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 394 350
No. of Characters: 1763 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.455 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.475 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.309 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 119 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.279 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.33 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.571 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.18 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5