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The passage explains how tidal energy can be exploited to produce a part of electrical energy. However, the lecturer provides some points that cast doubt on the efficacy of such energy source.
First of all, the lecturer asserts that electrical power which is produced in tidal power plant is just a small fraction of the total amount which is needed by the country. It has a temporary nature in manufacturing electricity and can just contribute to producing a small part of regional needs. It is in contrast to the passage that indicates the tidal energy can have a significant role as an alternat...
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Sentence: She argues that see water will intermix with the fresh water of river at the estuary, where the dam is constructed.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to that and see
Sentence: The fishing boats cannot transpass from the sea to the estuary because of the dam.
Error: transpass Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 13 9
No. of Words: 263 250
No. of Characters: 1281 900
No. of Different Words: 138 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.027 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.871 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.626 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.231 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.543 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.37 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.585 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
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