Integrated writing "Global warming" summarize main points in the listening passage and show how it adds information on the main ideas in the reading passage.
The reading passage is about the causes and effects of the global warming; which is defined as an increase in the temperature of the earth. Meanwhile, the listening passage adds more information about the correlation of the global warming and politics, as well as it reflects the public opinion on the global warming.
First of all, the professor in the lecture, points out to the economic costs that many developing countries are confronting due to the unsustainable life style that rich people are living, and their unconstraint fossil's use for entertainment issues, which according to th...
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Sentence: Secondly, politically speaking, the professor in the lecture clarifies the political conflict of how to control the emissions that are caused by the increase of carbon dioxide release, and how different programs were proposed in different countries, referring to a protocol, that implies the limitation of efficient energy use, to control such emissions in the developed countries, which inevidably, was not approved by so many countries until Austria ratified the treaty in December 2007.
Error: inevidably Suggestion: inevitably
Sentence: The professor also, clarified how the media could play a significant role by spreading the word about the jeopridizing consequences of the glabal warming, to the whole world.
Error: glabal Suggestion: global
Error: jeopridizing Suggestion: jeopardizing
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