Integrated writing-tpo 9
The reading discusses the advantages of the fuel-cell-engine as new replacement of power in cars instead of the internal-combustion engine and provides three reasons of support. However, the lecture claims the fuel-cell-engine cannot be a perfect replacement and rejects each author's reason.
First, the reading describes that the main problem of the internal-combustion which is using petroleum as scarce material in spite of the Hydrogen. The professor refutes this point by explaining that the fuel-cell- engine cannot be a good alternative because the gaining pure Hydrogen from water is not an easy process and water needs extremely to be cold. So this kind of Hydrogen is quite artificial substance.
Second, the article argues that the use of the fuel-cell-engine cause less pollution than using the internal combustion engine. The professor rejects this point by saying that the pure hydrogen also makes pollution because for achieving that it is necessary to burn the oil and fossil fuel which emit pollution as well.
Finally, the reading claims that the cell-fuel-engines are economical and more popular than the internal -combustion engines. The professor opposes this point by taking that the Platinum using the fuel-cell- engine are too expensive and without platinum the process cannot be successful.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 12
No. of Words: 203 250
No. of Characters: 1095 1200
No. of Different Words: 111 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.775 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.394 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.22 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 67 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.833 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.471 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.693 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.071 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4