What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room?
In a house, each room has several characteristics which make it different from other rooms. Dining room is a place to get together all family members for having food; living room should be luxurious with spectacular view to outside for the guest who comes to share their pleasure with the owner; the kitchen is a place to ignite and enhance the ingenuity and curiosity by making palatable meals. To my perspective, a personal room is the best definite space for me and I never replace my private room with any other rooms. My room is place that I owe all I have in the world with great sense of belongingness, where I will miss whenever I am far from. In the following passages, I put light on my reasons why my personal room is the best one.
First, my room includes precious stuff and prodigious memories which make it terrific and unique for me. Personal room is a space that every individual spend most time in, and create excellent and fabulous moments while living there. In fact each person's room is the only place that the specific friends can be invited there and add some another memories in that place. Sculptures, worthy prize, rewards, significant books, decorative things, and memorable stuff all are located in that private room. less or more, it has completely personal design and whenever can make surprise the owner by reminding the nice moments.
Second, the personal room is convenient and comfortable for everybody. in fact, cozy bed, private technologies like TV, video player, and computer can be located there. Persons try to make their own room the most convenient room with putting all things they need.
Furthermore, my room gives me a privacy that none of the other space of the house can get. The place for decision making, pondering on obsessions is a place which is named our personal room. While, suppose in the living room, you sit to speculate for a moments. No wonder, it is most likely that I lose concentration easily by noise of the siblings or a new comer as guest in the house.
Finally, by taking all above-mentioned arguments in consideration, the personal room can be the undeniably perfect room in the home, as it is usually convenient, quiet, and memorable space defined to a specific person.
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I have just 20 days till my exam..
While, my essays are going terrible and disappointing.
Please, give me some advise how to improve my skill in writing to get 27 in short time??
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My room is place that I owe
My room is the place that I owe
every individual spend most time in
every individual spends most time in
add some another memories
add some other memories
and memorable space
and a memorable space
Sentence: My room is place that I owe all I have in the world with great sense of belongingness, where I will miss whenever I am far from.
Error: belongingness Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 388 350
No. of Characters: 1800 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.438 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.639 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.613 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.94 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.393 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.598 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5