What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room?
it is an undeniable fact, that we spend in our home most of the time. we eat there, sleep there, and meet friends there. In my opinion, every person has his/her favorite room. For some people it could be their bedroom or, maybe, a bathroom, but as it to me, my favorite and the most important room for me is the kitchen.
Firstly, although bedroom can be considered as the room where we spend much of our time, I think, that we should count our conscious time. If so, kitchen takes the first place, because when we wake up, come from work or training or invite friends, we usually go to the kitchen. Moreover, I usually do my homework and talk with relatives exactly at this room, which makes it very important for me.
Secondly, in my view, the kitchen is the coziest place in the entire home. For example, when my friend comes around at evening, we usually sit and drink coffee in the kitchen, and an interesting topic brings forward itself. For me, the evening kitchen is also a best place to reveal any secrets with your couple or friend.
Finally, the kitchen is a place where we eat. this can be obvious, but where we consume food and what we eat is very important. At our personal kitchen we can cook any meals from various cuisines, contributing to good health and enjoying the art of cooking. one can control precisely the amount of fat, protein and other nutritious that one consumes.
what conclusion can be drawn from this? every room has its particular benefits in contrast with others, but kitchen has a large spectrum of functions, that I have enumerated above. I think, that kitchen is the most important room in the house, because we spend a lot of time there, eating, talking, and having fun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in contrast, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58899676375 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36552091403 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8884722862 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4117647059 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186253283364 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666955393996 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648613433482 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118678195164 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726734347799 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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