It is better to marry someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who is different from you. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I think it is better to marry someone who is similar to me, rather than struggling all along the life, by marrying someone who is different from me. Marrying a person with similar taste, makes many things easier and brings laurels in life. Co-operation, dedication, motivation and several other important factors, which are much necessary to succeed in life, automatically come to those couples with similar tastes. This is the reason, why I would like to marry a person who is very much similar to me, in all aspects.
First of all, marrying a person with tastes simi...
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