It is often not a good thing to move to a new city or a new country because of the lose of old friends

Sentence: She have to spend a long time until find an approriate job and living place as well as a group of other new friends for she have almost lost the communication opportunity with most friends in New York.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to until and find

Sentence: Then the paradox exists between you and your friends, there is no boubt that your relationship get into trouble more oftenly than when you are not familiar.
Description: The fragment relationship get into is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace get with verb, past participle

Sentence: There are an example, the couple, one kind of relationship, are much easier to quarral than the normal friends, which considerd as another relationship.
Description: The fragment an example , is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is

Sentence: Yet, suppose we can learn to overcome this emotion by find other methods to communicate with the good friends when still stay in the former location.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to by and find

Sentence: However, hardly can I accept this kind of decision from my viewpoint, as I consider it no good to ourslef for two primary reasons I have listed below.
Error: ourslef Suggestion: ourself

Sentence: The humain beings are a kind of social creature with a large range of communication scale, from their relatives, friends, co-workers, to the strangers.
Error: humain Suggestion: human

Sentence: Unfortunatly, if someone sacrafices all of the social group to move to another place, what they lose may overweigh what they receive, since they have almost lost the connection with their group they built before.
Error: overweigh Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: sacrafices Suggestion: sacrifices

Sentence: For instence, suggesting Mary decided to move to New York from Washington just for her best friends moved there.
Error: instence Suggestion: instance

Sentence: She have to spend a long time until find an approriate job and living place as well as a group of other new friends for she have almost lost the communication opportunity with most friends in New York.
Error: approriate Suggestion: appropriate

Sentence: Sometimes, it is diffcult for us to keep proper relationship with the close friend, as you get closer to eath other, you would inevitabaly find out that you are different in many aspect mainly because of your distinguished value.
Error: diffcult Suggestion: difficult
Error: eath Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: inevitabaly Suggestion: inevitably

Sentence: Then the paradox exists between you and your friends, there is no boubt that your relationship get into trouble more oftenly than when you are not familiar.
Error: oftenly Suggestion: often
Error: boubt Suggestion: bout

Sentence: There are an example, the couple, one kind of relationship, are much easier to quarral than the normal friends, which considerd as another relationship.
Error: quarral Suggestion: quarrel
Error: considerd Suggestion: consider

Sentence: Furthermore, We can view the high frequent quarral between couples by the divource rate.
Error: divource Suggestion: divorce
Error: quarral Suggestion: quarrel

Sentence: We would not only keep in fine relationship with the old friends, but also handle our personal issue flexibaly within the current social circle.
Error: flexibaly Suggestion: flexibly

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 16 2

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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 16 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 483 350
No. of Characters: 2240 1500
No. of Different Words: 242 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.688 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.638 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.498 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 140 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.874 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.298 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.472 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.206 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5