Leaders like John F.Kenendy and Martin Lutherking made important contributuions to the people of the united states.Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.

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Leaders like John F.Kenendy and Martin Lutherking made important contributuions to the people of the united states.Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.

As commonly sensed, some prestigious leaders have won great applause from people all over the world and have done many important contributions for the people of theirs country. Among them we can consider Mihatma Gandhi as one of the eminent and greatest leaders that humans should have. I, me as a person, believe that he is worthy to mention for conspicuous reasons: his great acknowledgment: independence of India, his austere and modest life style, and his strong attiude about human beings.

Independence of India was the most significant acknowledgement that he brought for Indian people. Since then, Indians had been suffering from exploitation and slavery of the English army and other invading countries which had exhausted India ‘s tremendous natural resources. Indians were treated as second residents and prohibited to get to higher class of society, so they were poor and helpless. Finally, Gandhi’s peace protest during years saved Indian from violence, discrimination and poverty.

During recession time after the independence, Modest and austere life of Gandhi taught many things to Indian people to build a free, independent and salubrious country. They learned that they should work hard in order to manufacture their needs rather being dependent upon other countries products; moreover, they found out they should pursue modest life early to achieve highest advances in future.

Gandhi strong attitude about peace and moral ethics changed the world and taught other revolutionists to pursue peace and non-violence to achieve their reforms in their society. ‘Violence simply brings violence’, the quote that should be remembered.

In summary, with all this taken into account, we can infer that Mihatma Gandhi made significant contributions to people owing to acknowledge independence of India, be as a paragon for austere and modest life, teach people how peace gains triumph rather than violence.

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Sentence: As commonly sensed, some prestigious leaders have won great applause from people all over the world and have done many important contributions for the people of theirs country.
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Sentence: I, me as a person, believe that he is worthy to mention for conspicuous reasons: his great acknowledgment: independence of India, his austere and modest life style, and his strong attiude about human beings.
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