Living in big cities or small villages. Which do you prefer?
There have appeared endless discussions over living environment. Some people hold the strong belief in the advantages of settling down in small villages while others show their great interest in colonizing in big cities. From my own viewpoint, I am in favor of the latter.
First and foremost, what I put in my priority is living conditions. It cannot be denied that being in big cities means being in the most developed areas of country. This development intensely requires great quantity and quality of human resources. Therefore, main education institutions are often located in such places. As ...
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If you can write the essay in
If you can write the essay in half an hour, it will be ok.
Yeap. I agree that time
Yeap. I agree that time management is the crucial problem.
for TOEFL essays, 473 words
for TOEFL essays, 473 words are relatively more. In the real exam, 350-400 words will be enough.
Sentence: By dealing with
Sentence: By dealing with challenges in such a relentless surroundings like that, people we are likely to motivate themselves to not be left behind.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a negator
Suggestion: Refer to to and not
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.617 7.5
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 33 15
No. of Words: 473 350
No. of Characters: 2452 1500
No. of Different Words: 253 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.664 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.184 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.828 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 191 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 120 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 97 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 67 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.617 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.264 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.41 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.048 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
I tried to reduce the essay length, but I think that if it is too short, it will be considered a poor supported essay. Hope you can evaluate it for me. Thank you :)