Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, Agree /Disagree ?

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Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, Agree /Disagree ?

Everybody’s way of thinking, everybody’s view point towards life is different.
Money is the most crucial thing and it matters a lot for every individual in this world.A $10 note means a lot for the poor people even it doesn’t make a huge difference for the rich ones.Today for money people are ready to do anything without bothering weather it is right or wrong.With money we can buy anything we want.Today is a very competitive world,to lead a successful and luxurious life the most important thing needed is MONEY.

With money we all can buy the very basic needs like food, clothing and shelter for ourselves. If you have enough then everybody will respect you.The more money you have the more attention you get in a society.With lots of money you can also help other people by doing any activity like charity or opening school for poor children with free education.With money we can fulfill our own dreams as well the dreams of our loved ones.We can provide a better secured life and good education for our children.If we have enough money we are satified and can live a very happy and comfortable life.

Earning money has become a very important aspect of life.Nowadays even the college students do part time job to help their family or to fulfill their needs. For example, I live away from my home so I need money for my daily needs like my rent,my bills,my food,etc.so i do a part job to fulfill my these basic needs.Everywhere you go you need money.But along with this earning you should also not for your family members, your loved ones,your friends.Money has importance but it is not more than your family.You should never forget that family comes first.It is not bad to earn more money but at the same time it also important to spend time with your children as well.People have become so busy in making money that they forget they have their own personal lives also.One should be able to balance and manage his/her personal and professional life.If this balance is maintained then I think it is no harm in making more and more money.

In conclusion,I think making more money is good only if you have a balanced life and not giving more importance to your family than your money.Also we should not forget that money can buy any materialistic thing but not happiness which you can get only from your family.

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