Movies are popular all over the world for several reasons. They are entertaining, educational and archieve of real history of life. Furthermore, movie industries have become a great income source for actor, actrees, directors, producers as well as for the governemnt. They have influence on developing multicultural relations among different countires and emergences new idea of innovation to the scientific community. The elaboration of those reasons with examples in the following passages will clarify popularity of movie all over the world.
Firstly, people go to cinema hall to get rid of monotonocity. They enjoy movies in the cineplex and rejuvanate. This help them to become fresh in mind and start works with full speed. The story, fighting, social activities that are depicted in movie remove all the tensions of its viewers and fill their mind with enjoy and happiness.
Secondly, movie gives some educational and social teaching. Every movie is created with the aim of some moto. The audience learn these positive lessons from movie. Especially, movie has a great impact on children if they are build with proper educational background.It is clear that every country has some traditional family movie which is liked by every citizens regardless of age, culture and religion. Because those evergreen movies have some local and international flavor of learning.
Thirdly, movies are a great income source. Though it takes huge amount to produce a movie, it earn a lot when released. This large amount of income is distributed with all the personnels related with the development of that specifice movie. So, movie helps to make a country unemployed also.
Finally, some movie stores country's history and acts as repository of important incident of that country. This helpls to merge cultural activities among different movies. As for example, Cann festival, a great conglomeration of movies from different part of the world, facilitate to archieve movies as well as to exchange cultural variiety.
In conclusion, movie is popular for its unending fascinating qualities, if monitored, censored correctly.
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