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Now a day, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people lived? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my view, easier food preparation has definitely improved the way people lived. Though there are a few disadvantages but the benefits are more in number. As the technology is evolving, food preparation is becoming easier. The reasons are elaborated as follows.
First, with the advent of variety of mixers, grinders and food processors, the time required for making basic preparations for food dropped down drastically. When these machines were not available, people had to invest a lot of time and energy in the tiring jobs of chopping and cutting vegetables, or mincing meat. In large families...
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Sentence: We can just logon to the internet and view a numerous blogs that discus food recipes and different food preparation techniques. we can prepare our favorite foods at any time we want just by following the instructions available on the internet.
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