I believe, improved technology has already changed the way people live, today. Microwave, oven, and refrigerator have taken a very important place in every kitchen. Nowadays, we hardly can see kitchen without these devices. These help us to save our time and energy, so people can concentrate on the other important things rather cooking. In early days, women used to spend whole day in the kitchen. However, today’s women can easily play various roles, as a wife, a mother, and a working woman with the help of these devices.
First, there is a saying that, “Time is money” and it’s true...
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OMG!!:( First of all, I did
OMG!!:(
First of all, I did spelling mistake, which is very very bad at this stage.
Second, as per my understanding, I believe this sentence structure is wrong. I am sorry, but I didn't get you exactly. If you can explain me about the sentence and flaws which you mentioned, I would really appreciate.
Thank you so much..!!
Ana.
should be 'we reach home' not
should be 'we reach home' not 'we rich home'
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Got it..!! I will post
Got it..!!
I will post integrated essays too.
Thanks,
Ana.
Hi, I have a question about
Hi,
I have a question about the link of integrated speaking. I didn't find detail questions there, such as reading paragraphs with listening. However, some of them have listening attached. So, I didn't understand, How can I submit my speaking recordings only on the basis of half information. OR Do I need to find my own questions or submit it?
Please help me with that.
Thanks,
Ana.
Some users didn't submit all
Some users didn't submit all info.
You can try this one first:
http://testbig.com/users/baoman
and then submit your own questions.
Sure, I 'll and submit it
Sure, I 'll and submit it soon.
Thanks!! :)
Ana.
Sentence: Traffic and pollution already kill our half of the energy, and by the time we rich home from work or college, we are totally exhausted.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to we and rich
flaws:
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
It is on top list:
http://www.testbig.com/essay-categories/toefl
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 366 350
No. of Characters: 1602 1500
No. of Different Words: 193 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.374 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.377 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.091 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.751 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.507 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.161 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5