People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences,career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, colleges or universities are becoming a must in a student’s life. There are numerous reasons for people to attend them. Such as career, New friendships, maybe a chance to experience the life alone without a family. Whatever the reason is, attending universities have many beneficial aspects on someone’s character. My arguments for this attitude is listed as follows.
One of the primary reason for my attitude is, it enables more career options. Universities may be the most common way for a career but also it is the most effective way. Since there are many unemployed people in the...
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Sentence: All in all, Attending universities have many beneficial aspects, It provides you a better future but the most important things is that it helps to make you self sufficient.
Description: The fragment most important things is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are
Sentence: Therefore many personal improvements can be exectured in these times.
Error: exectured Suggestion: executed
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 303 350
No. of Characters: 1424 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.172 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.7 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.591 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.15 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.425 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.498 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.131 0.07
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