A person you know is planning to move to your town or city.what do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town and city ? Why ? Use specific reasons and details to support your explanation.
I always loved the city I live in compared to the other cities of my country.Because it can provide everything you may need in your social life.In my opinion my friend who choose to live in my city will be pleased. There are many aspects of that she’ll love.These aspects are given below
First,Bursa is a large historical city.it reflects the ottoman empire’s ruling over the city.There are many historical places which she can visit, such as Burial grounds of Sultans,Bursa Grand mosque known as ‘’ Ulu Cami’’ and there are traces of ottoman architecture around everywhere of the city such as ramparts,castles,mosques.if she likes the history,this city is the place she seeks.
Second,She will like the transportation.With over 3.5 million people, it may be considered a large city but There is almost no traffic jams in any time of the day.Transportation is quite fluent,She’ll not have any trouble reaching any destination she wants.
Last but not least ,She can easily socialize in this city,There are many activities that she can do,There are a lot of wide open green spaces where she can enjoy the view of Bursa.And also the city is synonymous with Mount Uludağ.it’s a magnet for tourists from all over the world.if she likes the wintersports She may like the Uludağ which has many ski resorts and also holds many festivals in winter.
All in all,the city where I live in,satisfies every need of a person,I think she’ll love the variety of things she may do and the historical texture of the city
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