The article states that the privatized spaceflight industry will bring great benefits for both science and the public, and provides three reasons for that. But the professor is not in the same idea and avers that privat industry of spaceflight will have no advantages neither for science nor for public and opposes each reasons of the author.
First, the passage claims that privat space travel will make the expences of space exploration cheaper than now. However the professor refutes this point by stating that, having a privat space travel need to a complicated space traffic controlers, which makes cast and also because of the importance of safty of travelers, creators need to several steps of testing of their equipments and it is expensive too.
Secondly, the author concerned that privat companies will help to acceleration of scientific researches. On the other hand the lecturer thinks that it is not a sound idea and in fact it will prevent from more scientific discoveries, she explains that because of the high income in privt companis the reaserchers will work there and consequently due to the business goals of the privat companies the researchers are not motivated to work on research projects as well as in government companies.
Finally, the paper claims that privatized industry will save people's tax and public will be beneficiary. In the contrary the lecturer mentions that because of the huge expenses of building space stations or space airports even with taking money from customers the privat companies will need to public tax to complate their operations and finally people have to pay more tax.
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Sentence: But the professor is not in the same idea and avers that privat industry of spaceflight will have no advantages neither for science nor for public and opposes each reasons of the author.
Error: privat Suggestion: private
Sentence: First, the passage claims that privat space travel will make the expences of space exploration cheaper than now.
Error: expences Suggestion: expenses
Error: privat Suggestion: private
Sentence: However the professor refutes this point by stating that, having a privat space travel need to a complicated space traffic controlers, which makes cast and also because of the importance of safty of travelers, creators need to several steps of testing of their equipments and it is expensive too.
Error: privat Suggestion: private
Error: controlers Suggestion: controllers
Error: safty Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Secondly, the author concerned that privat companies will help to acceleration of scientific researches.
Error: privat Suggestion: private
Sentence: On the other hand the lecturer thinks that it is not a sound idea and in fact it will prevent from more scientific discoveries, she explains that because of the high income in privt companis the reaserchers will work there and consequently due to the business goals of the privat companies the researchers are not motivated to work on research projects as well as in government companies.
Error: companis Suggestion: companies
Error: privt Suggestion: print
Error: privat Suggestion: private
Error: reaserchers Suggestion: researchers
Sentence: In the contrary the lecturer mentions that because of the huge expenses of building space stations or space airports even with taking money from customers the privat companies will need to public tax to complate their operations and finally people have to pay more tax.
Error: privat Suggestion: private
Error: complate Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
No. of Sentences: 8 12
No. of Words: 266 2250
No. of Characters: 1341 1200
No. of Different Words: 145 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.039 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.041 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.609 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 33.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.718 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.426 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.732 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.12 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4