In regard to food, although some people prefer to eat at food stands and restaurant. I personally, prefer to cook and eat at home. The basis of my view are based on several reasons.
First of all, I like to be in control of what i'm eating. In another words, I prefer to know the exact ingredients of a certain meal. For example; when a person goes to a restaurant and order grilled fish, he would never be aware of the extra ingredients that could be added to his specific order, like salt, spices, oil and so on. Therefore, he would be eating the grilled fish without basically acknowledging what...
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