Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people prefer to live in a small town, while others find interest living in a big city. But before I state my opinion I have to admit that like anything these ideas also has advantages and disadvantages. However, I would much rather live in a big city than in a countryside. There are several arguments to show why I think so.
Firstly, I would like to say that living in a big city makes my life more comfortable and interesting, because there are so many amenities. In a big city you have an opportunity to get a good knowledge and improve your skills than in a small town because the most prestigious universities with the best professors are collected there. The good knowledge will help you to find a good job with a high salary, so job opportunities are much greater in a big city than in a small town. For instance, now I work as a trainee at broadcasting company called “Imedi TV” which is located in a big city. If I lived in a small town, I think that I would not have this kind of chance in my life.
From my point of view, in this century communication with other people became very important aspect of life. If you want to be successful in your cereer you have to have a lot of acquaintanceships. So in a big city there is a great opportunity to meet people from all over the world and gain friends. That is why living in a big city is also a great experience.
Lust but not least, the entertainment in a big city is very interesting. There are various kinf of amusing centers where you can relieve your strength and energy after the hard work. For teenagers there are lot of night clubs, movie theatres, theatres, museums, cafes and so on. In addition, in many cases concerts by famous musicians and cultural festivals are held in a big city.
To sum up everything I’d like to say that I love small town only for two weeks. From my point of view going there is a best way to relax from a busy and sometimes tiring life of a big city.
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Sentence: There are various kinf of amusing centers where you can relieve your strength and energy after the hard work.
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