Some people prefer to live in a small town while others prefer to live in a big city. Which do you prefer?

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Some people prefer to live in a small town while others prefer to live in a big city. Which do you prefer?

Live in a big city or in the countryside. That’s a good question. Having the pass experience of grow up in a small town and then moved to a big city, now I can choose in which I prefer to live. From my point of view, I prefer live in a big city rather than live in small town in the country side. I have experienced in my live both, good and bad things of living there. Before moved to a big city, I never thought that I would like living in a big city. Now, after 5 years of living in one, I cannot imagine living in a small town again. Even though some people prefer the freshness, the pure air a...

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