Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice.
Why shall we have to put ourselves into a jobs or occupations? One thing for sure is that we probably need to make a living through those jobs which can provide us sufficient dollars to raise up a family. But the level of salary has an obvious gap between working for employers and own a business myself. So I have the opinion that we should start at the lower level as an employee, then, as our qualification goes up, we had better run a company or factory as an employer.
As we step into the competitive society, which has tens of thousands of competitor, we should start our work as a milks or ...
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Sentence: With the gaining of experiences, much more understanding, and the hints of how to make it best, it won't take for so long before you have a chance to climb up to a place of manager, which means you have receive the complement from your senior and your supervisor so that they give you a promotion.
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and receive
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Avg. Sentence Length: 31.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.25 7.5
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Score: 5.5 out of 6 (or 27 in 30)
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 350 350
No. of Characters: 1639 1500
No. of Different Words: 206 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.325 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.683 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.865 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 31.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.25 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.353 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.609 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.214 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5