Students at a university have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference.
Students are normally given a choice to either live in university dormitories or in apartments in the community. Given a chance, I would definitely prefer to live in university dormitories than the apartments. This leads to lots of advantages in the long run and supports a student throughout his academic career. By living in university dormitories, a student is always reminded of his commitments to the university concerned. There are rare chances for the students to face any kind of difficulty in this scenario.
First of all, living in dormitories present in the univ...
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