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Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they contrast with the points made in the reading.
Globalisation is for sure a great improvement in the 20th century according to the professor. It was a period of increased average income growth and some people really did benefit from it. But the lecture quotes the major threats posed by globalisation as opposed to the advantages mentioned in the passage.
First of all, the Professor quotes that the income of the rich has significantly risen upto six-folds of its original per-capita income. Where as the poor only saw a marginal increase of less than three-folds in their income levels. This made the r...
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Sentence: But the lecture quotes the major threats posed by globalisation as opposed to the advantages mentioned in the passage.
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Sentence: Secondly, the Professor agrees to the fact in the reading that knowledge exchange is prevalent due to globalisation and it has helped in widening markets.
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Sentence: Thus, the employability of the candidates with abilities in their own nation which is developing, is losing charm due to globalisation.
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Sentence: Moreover, the professor brings into picture another outcome of globalisation which is not touched upon in the lecture.
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