Knowledge and enjoyment is omnipresent which can be learned and earned in different place i.e. outdoors or indoors. But who will decline the chance to pass his leisure time in a totally different rustic or urban place full with fun, enjoy and knowledge? Human nature will never miss the chance without any valid reason. That is why I prefer to spend my leisure time outdoors rather than passing indoors.
First of all, it gives me the opportunity to make my body and mind healthy which helps me to grasp the upcoming challenges with new inspiration that I have to face in my busy office working day. Going to hiking will not only refresh our mind but also rejuvante our body with strength. Normally, those people who are physically active in their leisure time live more than those who are inactive. For example, Most of the Korean, Japanese spend their leisure with outdoor activities e.g. travelling to Jeju Island or Busan which help them to maintain a sound health.
Secondly, it provides an ample opportunity to visit a new place, new food as well as meeting new people with different culture, religion and taste. This type of multicultural and multidimensional experience helps to increase knowledge that can be exploited in various practical scenario in real life. Visiting to Japan in leisure time will give you to taste Sushi- a popular Japanese food and you can learn about their culture, their historical place which is never possible when you will learn it from indoor while passing leisure. May be you can see some documentary while taking leisure at your home but it is not the same as visiting those places.
In addition, outdoor visit can think you the importance of time and its different mode of behavior. If you visit in a large theme park as a leisure then you will see the time will pass at light speed. On the contrary, if you go to a rural place and enjoy some rustic moment then you will feel that time has stopped there, life is very simple and slow there. Yes, it is time that will give you two different perceptions if you visit two different outdoors to enjoy your leisure period. We can understand from these different understanding that time has nothing to do but we have to utilize it to be happier and healthier.
In conclusion, outdoor visit to pass your leisure time will give you lot of enjoy, knowledge and experience which can not be achieved passing your leisure at your home or some indoor places.
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Knowledge and enjoyment is omnipresent which can be
Knowledge or enjoyment is omnipresent which can be
or: Knowledge and enjoyment are omnipresents which can be
May be you can see some documentary
Maybe you can see some documentary
flaws:
'leisure time' in the essay doesn't mean a couple of days but maybe a few hours. So the second reason may not be reasonable - 'a trip to Japan'.
In the third reason, the two examples are both in outdoors.
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