TOEFL essay:You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

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If I have a chance to visit any foreign place, I'd like to visit a place called Greece. I've heard alot about it from my cousins who paid their recent visit to this great place. It is said that Greece is known for its beauty, architecture and wild life. Below are the reasons why.

First, Greece is considered to be the most romantic place in the world. It is known for the highest number of airports in the world due to its huge tourism. People from all over the country pay visit's to this country for their post marriage celebrations. It has eye catching islands and fantastic sceneries. Ther...

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