Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy – computers or books? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation.

Computers are a boon to the present generation. They are most likely to replace books in the near future. Some believe that computers distract students from learning effectively. However, the reasons in putting them to a greater use outway the reasons of using them otherwise. Therefore, I want my school to invest its finances in purchasing computers rather than study books. Below are the reasons why.

First, computers are a great source of information. They contain loads of data available through various articles, journals, audio and video presentations. Hence, students can widen or enlarg...

*** The full content of this essay is available to VIP readers

Votes
Average: 5.3 (4 votes)
Essay Categories
Essays by the user:

flaws:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07

It is on top list:
http://www.testbig.com/essay-categories/toefl

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 401 350
No. of Characters: 1989 1500
No. of Different Words: 215 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.475 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.96 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.632 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 157 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 125 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.04 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.027 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.48 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.258 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.462 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5