The lecture talks about research conducted by a firm that used the group system to handle their work. He says that the theory stated in the passage was very different and somewhat inaccurate when compared to what happened for real.
First, some members got free rides. That is , some didn't work hard but got recognition for the nonetheless. This also indicate that people who worked hard was not given recognition they should have got. In other words, they were not given opportunity to shine. This directly contradicts what the passage indicates.
Second, Group were slow in progress. The passage says that groups are more responsive than individual because of number of people involved and there more resources. However, the speaker talks about how the form found out that groups were slower than individuals in decision making. Groups needed more time for meetings, where are necessary procedures in decision making. This was another part where experience contract with theory.
Third, influential people might emerge, and lead the group toward the glory or failure. If the influential people are going in right direction there would be no problem. But in cases where they go in the wrong direction, there in nobody that has enough influence to counter the decision made. In other words, the group might turn into the dictatorship, with the influential party as the leader, and might be less flexible in thinking. They might become one-sided, and thus fail to succeed.
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- Should Governments spend more money on improving road and highways, or should goverments spend more money on improving public transportation ( buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 75
- Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Other thinks that it is better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reason to develop your essay. 50
- Some people believe that university student should be required to attend classes. Other believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer. 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their student sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 70
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 12
No. of Words: 242 250
No. of Characters: 1197 1200
No. of Different Words: 150 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.944 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.946 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.374 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 52 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.235 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.704 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.647 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.283 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.511 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4