turkey as ammember of EU
European Union established on the idea of Coal and Steel Unity. During several years, its structure has been changing alot and ıts size has been increases day by day. Turkey was always want to be a member of this unity. In the last 1o years, Turkey's membership has been discussing tremendously. There are a lot of people who defend Turkey's membership of the unity. I also defend that Turkey should become a member of the European Union. I have several good reasons in order to support my ideas but two of them are the mos important ones: increase in exports and increase in quality due to competition.
European union can be the best way in order to export Turkish goods. By this union, Turkish economy will be develop greatly. Many textile and agricultural goods will be sell in foreign countries and this situation strengthen our economic power. By this union turkey will reach a chance to sell their high-quality, diverse economical goods.
I defend turkey's eu membership in order to increase our quality due to a competition ambience. ın this area all members try to do their best in order to survive. Turkey also will try to increase its quality in its properties. by that process, market will be vitalize. All process will be work in an ethical framework.
On the other hand, there are several people who are against to the idea of turkey's Eu's membership. According to these people Eu will increase prices of goods and accelerate the increasement of the rate of inflation. I completely against to their ideas.
Turkey as a developing country can be struggle with economical competition. Moreover, prices of goods will reach a standart that create an ethical atmosphere in economy.
For conclusion, Turkey should be a member of EU in order to increase its exports and in order to increase its quality by a competition atmosphere. there can be classified several good reasons in order to be a member of EU but these two reasons can be classified as the best economical reasons.
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