watching television has bad affects on child. Do u agree or disagree?
Television is a technological innovation that has great impact on our life. Nowadays, It is difficult to find a home without a television, isn't it? It become a most important thing in our home. By watching television, we can know what is going around the world but unfortunately it has bad affects on children. I have many reasons to hold this opinion.
First reason is children are not concentrating on their studies because they are becoming addicted to television programs. After coming from school they are spending lots of time before T.V. and not doing their home works more over this become a habit for them. Ask any child about their hobbies, 90% of them tells watching T.V..For example, my cousin's son know timings of the programs and that programs anchors because he spend most of his time in front of television.
Second reason is there is chance of accidents. Usually children has a tendency to imitate the hero like dialogues, style and actions. Some times hero may do fighting and jumps from one building to other building. By imitating this type actions, they are going into serious problems such as fractures and bleeding. For example, my friend's baby tried to hit the wall by seeing in a film, then she hospitalized for three months. Additionally, some programs are horror and making them to feel anxiety and tension, by watching these programs they are frightened, consequently not sleeping in night and some programs shows how to do bad things such as the stealing wallets, money. These type of programs have bad impact on them.
Third reason, it mainly affecting the eyesight of the child. Most of the children are wearing eye glasses from the age of eight. This happens because of watching televisions for long time and from a short distance.
To conclude, Televisions has bad affects on their studies, health and their behavior so parents should control their child and good supervision is necessary to avoid accidents by watching television.
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