What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a foreign country,give illustrations and reasons to develop your opinion.
Most people believe that the grass is greener on the other side and so alot of people migrate in search of the greener pastures and better life for themselves and their families. there are several advantages and also disadvantages of leaving your country and traveling to a foreign country and I will give the illustrations based on my experience.
First, I had to leave my country and travel abroad because it was difficult to get a job after three years of graduating with top grades from the university. Three months after I got to the united kingdom, i was called in for an interview and go...
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