The issue put forward in the given statement, namely that success is a result of hard work and luck plays a minor factor, is well presented and appears to be relatively sound at first glance. Nonetheless, closer scrutiny reveals that the argument is problematic in several critical respects.
To begin with, let me first define ''luck''. Lucky people are the one who bump into the opportunities and take advantage of them. For example, a successful businessman may have become successful because early in his life met a person who told him about this business idea. After all, if he had never m...
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No. of Words: 519 350 (less words in real exams. write the essay in half an hour)
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.259 0.35
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 519 350
No. of Characters: 2314 1500
No. of Different Words: 279 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.773 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.459 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.438 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 138 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.565 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.051 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.259 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.553 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.154 0.07
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