Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Sports should be a part of everyone's life to be healthy. Sports like tennis, basket ball, swimming helps us to maintain our body healthy. But nowadays, people are attracting by dangerous sports that causing damage of health. I think this is because of fashion and craze towards dangerous sports.
A great saying is there "it is easy to attract to bad things than good". That is true in case of dangerous sports. When watching dangerous sports like boxing, they creating a interest in young people. It is not bothering them that how much they suffer with that pains. For example, my brother used to see boxing when he puts on television. He used to enjoy when the man to whom he support, kicks the opposite man. He does not bother about opposite man's condition.
Nowadays dangerous sports become fashion in youth. Youth are playing dangerous sports and the man who wins the game becoming leader in colleges because everyone is praising him for his courage to do such dangerous activity. Due to this praises by friends and other college they want to do such things again and again. For example, my cousin brother participated in boxing and won. Everyone in college praised him for his talent. So next time when games are announced, all his friends gave his name first.
Young people have craze towards dangerous sports and to the players. They want to follow the players in style, the way they are standing, speaking, fighting and what not. Everything they are following. They want to imitate them and wants to fight like them. So they are attracting to the games more easier.
To conclude, young people wants to do something that is different from other. LIkely, they are choosing dangerous sport or activity to do. It's because of fashion and craze towards that games.
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Sentence: He used to enjoy when the man to whom he support, kicks the opposite man.
Description: The fragment he support , is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace support with verb, past tense
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Sentence Length SD: 4.707 7.5
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