Why people are living longer nowadays?

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Why people are living longer nowadays?

In my opinion, nowadays, people are living longer but like everything on earth it has some expectations. There is no doubt that advances in technology in every aspects of our lives like medical treatments, medical equipment and electronic and mechanical devices and machines made our life easier and less nervous. However, the improvement of technology brought us some bad issues that make people die soon, like accidents and air pollution.

Comparing today with the era of our past generations, we find that death rate due to some illnesses and diseases are reduced considerably. The first and t...

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