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According to the given passage the smart cars will provide more benifits to the people who have this smart car. Smart cars are easy to use because these cars have all automatic system to drive with the help of global postioning and advance sensor technology. Smart cars makes the driving safe, eaier, quicker and less expansive. All these things are possible only because of smart cars with advance technologies, which helps car to drive automatically. However smart cars are do all these things but not solve all these problems which mention in the passage like decrease the number of accidents, reduce the traffic problem and reduce the repair expansess. The professor provides all clarification to that problem and soultion. Let see it them one by one.

The fist reason is that smart cars reduce the number of accidents because it has the advance tecnology to drive automatically and take decision when car find the obstacles in their path with the help of sensors. All these are correct but it is also true that every technology fail occissaly. Then what we do. This failure may cause very dangerors accidents on the road. So it is not so much safer as it said in passage.

The second reason is that, it reduce the traffic. It prove that whenever any new invention is introduce to the world then people are like to use it very much. It means it not reduce the taffic problem but it will increase the number of driver on the highway to check this smart car. Means it also not reduce thr traffic.

Lastly, smart cars reduce the repair expansess but to this technology you have modify your car to purchase golbal service and sensors which are so expansive than your nomal car parts and also repair cost is also so expansive than your normal car repair. So because of all these reasons smart cars not solve the problem of accidents, traffic and repair cost.

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Sentence: However smart cars are do all these things but not solve all these problems which mention in the passage like decrease the number of accidents, reduce the traffic problem and reduce the repair expansess.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to like and decrease

Sentence: Let see it them one by one.
Description: A pronoun, personal, accusative is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, accusative
Suggestion: Refer to it and them

Sentence: The fist reason is that smart cars reduce the number of accidents because it has the advance tecnology to drive automatically and take decision when car find the obstacles in their path with the help of sensors.
Description: The fragment car find the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace find with verb, past tense

Sentence: This failure may cause very dangerors accidents on the road.
Description: The fragment very dangerors accidents is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace dangerors with adjective

Sentence: The second reason is that, it reduce the traffic.
Description: The fragment it reduce the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace reduce with verb, past tense

Sentence: It prove that whenever any new invention is introduce to the world then people are like to use it very much.
Description: The fragment It prove that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace prove with verb, past tense

Sentence: Lastly, smart cars reduce the repair expansess but to this technology you have modify your car to purchase golbal service and sensors which are so expansive than your nomal car parts and also repair cost is also so expansive than your normal car repair.
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and modify

Sentence: According to the given passage the smart cars will provide more benifits to the people who have this smart car.
Error: benifits Suggestion: benefits

Sentence: Smart cars are easy to use because these cars have all automatic system to drive with the help of global postioning and advance sensor technology.
Error: postioning Suggestion: positioning

Sentence: Smart cars makes the driving safe, eaier, quicker and less expansive.
Error: eaier Suggestion: easier

entence: However smart cars are do all these things but not solve all these problems which mention in the passage like decrease the number of accidents, reduce the traffic problem and reduce the repair expansess.
Error: expansess Suggestion: expanses

Sentence: The professor provides all clarification to that problem and soultion.
Error: soultion Suggestion: solution

Sentence: The fist reason is that smart cars reduce the number of accidents because it has the advance tecnology to drive automatically and take decision when car find the obstacles in their path with the help of sensors.
Error: tecnology Suggestion: technology

Sentence: All these are correct but it is also true that every technology fail occissaly.
Error: occissaly Suggestion: accusal

Sentence: This failure may cause very dangerors accidents on the road.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: dangerors Suggestion: dangerous

Sentence: It means it not reduce the taffic problem but it will increase the number of driver on the highway to check this smart car.
Error: taffic Suggestion: traffic

Sentence: Means it also not reduce thr traffic.
Error: thr Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: Lastly, smart cars reduce the repair expansess but to this technology you have modify your car to purchase golbal service and sensors which are so expansive than your nomal car parts and also repair cost is also so expansive than your normal car repair.
Error: nomal Suggestion: normal
Error: expansess Suggestion: expanses
Error: golbal Suggestion: global

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 18 12
No. of Words: 326 250
No. of Characters: 1504 1200
No. of Different Words: 146 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.249 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.613 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.255 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 66 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.903 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.499 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4