Motivation
We all dream for happiness, but in reality, we live in a world full of hurt and sorrow, it is my hope using my unique ability and knowledge to make a difference. Psychology is a subject that I am interested in throughout my life since I’ve found the powerful magic in it. I believe that it is truly a practical method that would help me improve the capability to diagnose and to treat problems that others may experienced. In other words, by learning psychology, I would not only be able to gain all manner of flexible skills but connect more deeply with people.
After recognizing how serious the tough experiences in my childhood had affected me and how helpful the school psychologist had encouraged me by her words, I always remind myself that I want to become the catalyst which can make positive changes in others’ life. I know this program would help me develop well-honed critical thinking ability and teach me skills to become a better communicator, leading me closer to my dream of becoming a psychologist.
Furthermore, knowing the fact that one day I would be able to help people get though difficulties by repairing their worst things and rebuilt new quality in their life, is what truly drives me the most. This is also the greatest feedback and pleasure I could ever receive. Abraham Lincoln once said "I am not bound to succeed, but I am bound to live up to what light I have",and I’m now making a difference.
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Sentence: I believe that it is truly a practical method that would help me improve the capability to diagnose and to treat problems that others may experienced.
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