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Why you want to study at Queens College.
The situation was very taught in the country when I began my education at the Khazar University in 2003. Azerbaijan was on the edge of the oil production and building construction boom. Eventually there were plenty foreign companies in the country , therefore I decided that I need education in english and definitely closer to Western education.
I decided to enter Khazar university where I can get Western education in English without moving to West. After first year of my education I began to work, perceiving a need to compare and use my new knowledge with Azerbaijan business practice. I...
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Sentence: I was responsible for finding products and spare parts from all around the world, negotiations with suppliers regarding the price then purchasing and delivery it to British Petroleum, When I worked at this company I had an interest to write new small business projects.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, accusative
Suggestion: Refer to delivery and it
Sentence: And Currently I am working at this position but for my future goal to became best in management consulting I need get Master degree at one of the best universities or colleges of the world.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to to and became
Sentence: Eventually there were plenty foreign companies in the country , therefore I decided that I need education in english and definitely closer to Western education.
Error: english Suggestion: English
We separated the essay to five paragraphs for easier reading.
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Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 499 350
No. of Characters: 2426 1500
No. of Different Words: 257 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.726 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.862 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.985 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 164 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 139 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 99 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 82 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.95 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.47 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.572 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.156 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5