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I will be appearing for TOEFL on 4th October and i desperately need someone or anyone to go through my essays and criticize it based on its structure, grammar and punctuation. Appreciated.!!

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My essays:

Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer period of time. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer. 90
Being able to speak well is more important than being able to write well. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer. 87
Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
Should stores and businesses be open or closed on Sundays? Use details and examples to support your explanation. 90
Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reaso 40
A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 95
Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay. 83
Holidays honor people or events. If you could create a new holiday, what person or event would it honor and how would you want people to celebrate it? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 45
A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country. Where should this visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. 67