Claim: Major policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other government experts.
Reason: Politicians and other government experts are more informed and thus have better judgment and perspective than do members of the general public.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
When major policy decisions are concerned in our society, how to better devise them and lay down them efficiently has been always an heatedly discussed topic. Someone argues that significant decisions of public policies should be left to politicians and other government experts, because they are well educated and thus have better judgement and perspective than the general public. From my perspective of view, such viewpoint may stay true under some circumstances. But this doesn't mean that it wouldn't lead to some negative consequences for our society. It is also worth to point out that government should keep open mind to public voices in order to serve its major purpose.
To start off, considering the better background and field experiences of most of politicians and government experts, we should give them more freedom to make great decisions in most cases. It is because their unique abilities and deeper insights that help them better consider many different factors and finally come to more comprehensive decisions for safeguarding the public interests. This is something that can't be accomplished by the general public. Roosevelt's New Deal Policy well exemplifies my viewpoint. It is because of his unique insights given by years of economic working experiences that he conjured up a marriage between free market and government regulation, which can't be proposed by the people without such background. It is also thank to such policy that the states had stepped out of the Great Depression and started one of the most greatest revivial in its history. From this perspective, both of the reason and the claim part stay tenable.
However, tenable as both the reason and the claim hold in the aforementioned case, I have to contend that indiscriminately giving rights to politicians and experts of public security to draw important policies may backfire, when they don't possess high morality and even take advantages of such privileges to just meet with their own needs. If this is true, many inappropriate behaviors of those government officials are more likely to occur, like misconducts, inappropriate use of public resources and so forth. Therefore, the exclusion of others' involvement in the policy-making process may lead to deleterious results that we don't want to see. For instance, a negative side of the New Deal Policy is that some government officials had taken sides when allocating resources during regulation of free market. Some of them might only allow those companies which gave them a great amount of financial benefits to engage with the most important projects, excluding those more suitable candidates. In this sense, only left significant policy-making to politicians and fields experts mayn't even serve our purpose to make a better society in the long run.
Last but not least, what I feel the most questionable part of the issue is that the author blindly deprives the chance of joining public decision from the general public. As a matter of fact, many of the demotic, even without proper knowledge about how to devise public policies, can well contribute to a more sensible decision. The essential reason is that they are major participants of public activities, from education to economic, therefore their voices really matter a lot for us to devise more sensible decisions and guarantee our society's prosperity. For instance, when coming to internet era, governments in many countries strive to fully utilize the power of widespread internet. However, as far away from people's daily life, government officials even can't imagine what the most urgent demands from the people, which should be prioritized first and put into the their top list. By letting the public joining the process of demand collection, Chinese government has gathered most of their daily requirements, which help them prioritize their requirements and designate a better public policy, especially when urgent situations, such coronavirus breakout.
In summary, while I partially agree with the viewpoint that we should let politicians and field experts to take charge of public decision, adherence to such policy without any surveillance about their behavior might also lead to detrimental effects. Furthermore, considering the fact that most of people well understand the real situations and can illustrate their requirements, I still argue that allowing them to join into this process can be more beneficial.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...y down them efficiently has been always an heatedly discussed topic. Someone argue...
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Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...tter judgement and perspective than the general public. From my perspective of view, such view...
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Line 1, column 477, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...true under some circumstances. But this doesnt mean that it wouldnt lead to some negat...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...umstances. But this doesnt mean that it wouldnt lead to some negative consequences for ...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the politicians') or simply say ''most politicians''.
Suggestion: most of the politicians; most politicians
...ter background and field experiences of most of politicians and government experts, we should give ...
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Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...insights that help them better consider many different factors and finally come to more compre...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ublic interests. This is something that cant be accomplished by the general public. ...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ething that cant be accomplished by the general public. Roosevelts New Deal Policy well exempl...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...market and government regulation, which cant be proposed by the people without such ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thanked'.
Suggestion: thanked
...ple without such background. It is also thank to such policy that the states had step...
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Line 3, column 849, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'greatest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: greatest
...Great Depression and started one of the most greatest revivial in its history. From this pers...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ortant policies may backfire, when they dont possess high morality and even take adv...
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Suggestion: don't
...may lead to deleterious results that we dont want to see. For instance, a negative s...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...nce of joining public decision from the general public. As a matter of fact, many of the demot...
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Line 7, column 763, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s daily life, government officials even cant imagine what the most urgent demands fr...
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Line 7, column 869, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...hould be prioritized first and put into the their top list. By letting the public joining...
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Line 9, column 290, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... Furthermore, considering the fact that most of people well understand the real situations and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in summary, as a matter of fact, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 66.0 33.0505617978 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 98.0 58.6224719101 167% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3729.0 2235.4752809 167% => OK
No of words: 703.0 442.535393258 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30440967283 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.14918898149 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88179484284 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 340.0 215.323595506 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483641536273 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 1160.1 704.065955056 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6662261321 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.423076923 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0384615385 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73076923077 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316971112249 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835134452071 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803133439091 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184592454622 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707423231186 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 100.480337079 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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