The bar chart shows the number of times per week(1000s),over five weeks,that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The information in regard to the three computer packages downloaded in once a week over a seven days from internet,is illustrated by horizontal representation.The data is celibrated in seconds.
Now,looking at the details,Net holds the dominant position in the downloaded computer packages with three quarters in given time .Meanwhile,activex and java were downloaded with 40000s and half respectively.Whereas,the downloaded time of Active x was afifth which plunged in week 3 with one in ten downloads whilst java had allmost same value of downloaded computer packages in both weeks.Additionally,the downloaded of net packages was 90000s in second week with increased in week third with hundred times.
Probing ahead,with remaining information,Activex computer package was downloaded 40000s in fourth week and value upsurged with half downloaded packages in fifth week.Noticeably,java package was downloaded just more about quarters in week 4 Which inclined in fifth week with 80000s.Lastly,net computer packages was observed 90000s which further culminated to hundred time downloads of packages.
Overall,it is patently obvious that Active x was downloaded mostly over five weeks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he data is celibrated in seconds. Now,looking at the details,Net holds the dominant p...
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...ages with three quarters in given time .Meanwhile,activex and java were downloaded with 4...
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... three quarters in given time .Meanwhile,activex and java were downloaded with 40000s an...
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...oaded with 40000s and half respectively.Whereas,the downloaded time of Active x was afi...
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...ith 40000s and half respectively.Whereas,the downloaded time of Active x was afifth ...
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...nloaded computer packages in both weeks.Additionally,the downloaded of net packages was 9000...
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...uter packages in both weeks.Additionally,the downloaded of net packages was 90000s i...
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...ird with hundred times. Probing ahead,with remaining information,Activex computer ...
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...s in fourth week and value upsurged with half downloaded packages in fifth week.N...
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... half downloaded packages in fifth week.Noticeably,java package was downloaded just more a...
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...loaded packages in fifth week.Noticeably,java package was downloaded just more about ...
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...hich inclined in fifth week with 80000s.Lastly,net computer packages was observed 9000...
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...rved 90000s which further culminated to hundred time downloads of packages. Overall,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, look, second, third, whereas, while, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97076023392 4.92477711251 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.97161709485 2.65546596893 150% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.899630801 43.030603864 386% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 255.25 112.824112599 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.75 22.9334400587 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.25 5.23603664747 291% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284199584092 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192497858167 0.103423049105 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061967935941 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192497858167 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061967935941 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 13.2329268293 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 61.2550243902 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.3012195122 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.23 11.4140731707 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.4329268293 262% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.