Causes and effects of working too much for making a living
Today, people spend much more time and energy on earning than other people used to do in the past. What are reasons for and consequences of this issue? The essay will present some causes and effects of working too much to making a living.
The first cause is that people’s demands now are significantly increasing. Various modern devices, such as smart television, air conditioners or dish washing, appear popularly, and they become vital needs of human beings. To own these items, people must earn much more to afford to pay the luxurious demands whereas people in the past only work to be content with basic needs. Moreover, there is a big number of job opportunities to raise income. People work not only in their companies but also in other workplaces as part-time jobs. For example, many talent doctors work in private clinics after they come back from the hospital. Finally, people have to struggle to get the necessary finance for their high dominant expenses because cost of living more and more dramatically increases.
Along with making a lot of money, working too much can result in some negative effects. Firstly, it can make the family relationship become poorer and poorer since hard workers usually get up early when their babies have not woke up to go office, and they come back home when the kids have gone to bed. Therefore, parents cannot take care of and communicate with their children regularly. In addition, consuming a lot of time can lead to some health problems. For instance, as they usually have to stay still many hours in front of the computer without participating in physical activities, they can get eye issues or diabetes. Especially, going to the bed too late results in stress which is the main cause of stomach – ache.
In brief, there are several reasons for working too much such as to satisfy increasing requirements, to be supplied various attractive jobs and to pay considerable expenses. Meanwhile, there are some consequences of spending a lot of time on earning such as to make family relationship become less close and get some serious diseases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'waked', 'woken'.
Suggestion: waked; woken
...get up early when their babies have not woke up to go office, and they come back hom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in brief, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 965.302439024 181% => OK
No of words: 355.0 196.424390244 181% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92676056338 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64561484745 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 106.607317073 192% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 283.868780488 194% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4487497915 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316193159845 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929132128545 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113697123282 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205006812541 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822596560447 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 40.7170731707 221% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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